Gu gu ga meme
nono bota rek
tata mata seme
gota ruta brek
Ane mano kuna
rona mona wees
gotu moru vuna
aja buja tees
Ma ma ba ba ro
ko ko bata kli
be be no no glo
le ke meke svi.
Author notes
Kid's first poetry.
Written September 14th, 2005
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having just finished reading stephen kings book desperation this poem strikes me as being the language of the unformed...that is ...the dead lol perhaps you have secret talents for example do you get a bit hairy on moonlit nights....do you see thnigs...things that arent really there...oh its spooky...by the way whats the intonation for raising the dead ...
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imaginative
Now you don't need to translate this baby talk - I remember the lanuage from long, long ago.
A lovely, imaginative poem and perhaps it's just as well we don't understand everything that babies say - some of it could be very unflattering! Like the child in infant school who on being asked, described her mother as being someone she loved very much and who wore large pink knickers!
Nice one. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
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Thank you PF for your applause.
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yes, it worth to wait. Each new day and each new smile from our wee worth a life. There is nothing in mom's life more precious than her babies "poetry". I am glad you like it. Thank you for your good wishes.
~Sonja~
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I love this! I know exactly what this poem is saying, only because I can't wait for my daughter to talk to me (in english, no go and gas and whatnots) After all it really is worth the wait right? thank you and good luck!
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Yes, true, it was hard but it worth to understand this special language.
Thank you for your sweet comment Sandi.
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Brilliant musing!
Ya know Sonja, somewhere in the world, someone is gonna know what that wee one said! hehehehehe This is so wonderfully original! Thank you for the giggles this afternoon
Best wishes in this contest! Blessings, Sandi
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Thanks Sam for your comment and good wishes.
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Now this is the words of a babbling.....brook.....
Very nicely done. Best wishes in the contest..
Sam
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Thanks Malabu ga ga guu goo
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wow lovley writing....poor baby lost his rattler...then screams for some milk.... or is it a she...crying for mommy to change her diaper?......lovely write...ga ga guu goo....
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Thank you creatine. Well, when I wrote this "poem", I had in my mind a time when my son was baby and when he tried to talk on his own language. It always was rhythmic and funny.
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This has wonderful rhyme and wonderful rhythm. well, of course that's easy when you're not constrained by making sense. But in addition, and that's amazing, youy achieved a kind of lyrical quality.
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I am not sure. lol Ask this wee above lol.
Thank you for your good wishes.
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well it's defo non sensical maybe you know the meaning?? good luck with the contest lol abigailxx
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LOL Don't be afraid...I am not going to have a baby . I am too old for this game. LOL.
This "nonsense" was prepared only for contest
Sonja
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Thank you billie
lol That was prepared just for this contest, and it was funny to write something like that.
Yes, sometimes kid's language sounds like from the other Planet. lol
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WHAT?
mina
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hmmm...I suppose it is foriegn baby talk. Ha ha. The lil one reminds me of my daughter with that hammer. LOL. Cute write.
Blessed be
~~Serenity~~
Biillie Jean
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