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Goodbye Sweet Sixteen

Goodbye sweet sixteen!
Soon to be gone are childhood dreams!
Soon to be fond memories
Are dances and athletic teams!

Beware childhood is ending!
Adult responsibility is near!
Hold on as long as you can
To all you love so dear!

Be wild and have lots of fun!
Sing, laugh and dance away!
While there is still time
Continue to have fun and to play!

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Written very quickly.
Written September 14th, 2005

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  • marsinlovee
    September 15, 2005
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    oooh even if it was written quickly i likies!
    Best of luck hun its kinda funny and some good rhymes!


  • September 14, 2005
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    I think this is a great poem to be written quickly It flows nice and it is so, so, so true LOL I think you'll do very well in this contest Best of luck!