As I sit on my bedroom floor
I wonder if you even care
So I begin to write
"If I slit my wrists tonight
And fell away to a silent sleep
Would you wish for me back
You don't understand what's going through my head
You were the only person that made my life worth while
And now you can't even look at me
Just because I told you what I felt for you
You make me ashamed that I ever liked you
So now as I'm writing this note
I'm filled with hate for you
Hate that will drive me to my death"
So I pick up the shiny blade
Press it to my skin
And begin my red death
"As I feel the blood pouring out I start to cry
Not for the pain
But for you
You will never understood me
And now will never will"
As I sign my name to my suicide note
I start to feel lightheaded
And everything starts to slowly fade away
Author notes
Feeling really bad, this is kinda about a guy that was a friend and yea. I'm not actually gonna kill myself don't worry. And everything in quotes is the letter that Im writing
Written September 14th, 2005
A contest entry
- Gimme dark and sad suicides... by MichelleLynn.
300 points, ended September 15, 2005, 18 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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wow! this is really good. it reminds me of mine that i have posted on here (you should read it) lol.. great jobberz! thanks for commenting on my stuff and good luck in the contest!
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Yeah this is pretty good but this part didn't make sense.
"You will never understood me
And now will never will"
Should be Understand and the first Will needs to come out.
I like the letter part though, even though it's a bit cliche.
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