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Out at Sea



Take me into your chill.
Envelop me, fold me,
Let your waters lip
and lick at me.
Take me further into your blankness.
Bitter chill sting my cheeks
And numb my body.
Let me hear your crashing devour
Brush and toss
Take me away from all of this.
Make me one within a sea of no-one else.
I want to live within your roar
To choke on the mist of endless horizons
That crack and tear.


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Written September 10th, 2002

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  • kezagirl27
    September 17, 2005
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    Wow how deep and sexy also you can hear the passion in the poem very good i love it xxxxx