The light around your perfect form
Residing still inside my dreams
I do not fear this gentle storm
The light around your perfect form
Ensures that I am safe and warm
One lifetime passes now, it seems
The light around your perfect form
Residing still inside my dreams
Author notes
Written on 14th September 2005 at 01:33 GMT
For Michael
A triolet, my first one ever
In a list
- Michael • next in list
- trophy 1 - gold • next in list
- written for contests • next in list
- 1-10 • next in list
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- form: triolet • next in list
A contest entry
- What is light? by Jay Elle.
300 points, ended October 31, 2006, 24 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Romance Rhyme (with a hitch) by poets whisper.
550 points, ended November 17, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
Comments
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Light, here in more ways than one. Beautiful rhyme with just a hint of romance. Good luck in the contest.
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What a lovely soft feel this has, a lovely poem,
thanks for entering,
Jay. -
Quick and light, beautiful tempo. -N
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Congratulations...~Lilac~
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This was dreamy and loving , poetic and inspiring, loved it's
lullaby of life glow that is always..wonderful little gem of a poem -
Oh...this is beautiful! You have done an awesome job with this. Thank you so much for entering the contest.
Sam
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