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Serenity

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Silent feelings of tranquility
Eternal peace  found within  
Replete with love and kindness    
Echoing calmness to begin
Never ending is God's love  
Instilled in hearts to atone
Transcending all others  
You are God alone

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Written September 13th, 2005

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  • Samplette gold member
    September 14, 2005
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    This was supposed to win as well....wait for a link...I will be awarding three more...sorry for the mix up.
    Sam


  • Frogzter gold member
    September 14, 2005
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    So beautifully done. I'm betting this one takes a trophy. This is awesome beyojnd words I have. You have done a marvelous job with the word you chose. Good Luck in the contest! Blessings to you~ Frog~


  • BluRosePoet8488
    September 13, 2005
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    Beautifully written as always, Sandy. Wondeful job! Very soft indeed. Like a fluffy blanket made of feathers to fall into. Love it! Love and hugs...
    ~Donna~


  • Arsenic-
    September 13, 2005
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    I do like this one, it is so soft... Serenity is hard to find.


  • astralshepherd gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    A wonderful acrostic and another trophy contender...Sam has her work cut out for her on this one. Lovely, simply lovely.
    ♥blessings and best wishes,~richard~♥


  • Samplette gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Oh, this is beautiful. I didn't realize I was going to get so many wonderful inspirational acrostics. Of course, with such a wonderful group of people I should have expected nothing less. Thank you for sharing serenity with us.
    Sam

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