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In Your Arms

In your arms. I feel so free,
and always hope that we will always be.

In your arms, I close my eyes,
and my body slowly dies.

In your arms, I dwell,
and to my knees I fell.

In your arms, I cry,
and on wings of hope I fly.

In your arms I stay,
each time is a new day.

In your arms, I whisper,
I love you always.

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By DarkenedDreams and Angel Lover Forever
Written September 13th, 2005

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  • iamfromabove
    September 29, 2005
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    This was really sweet. The love that is within this is so great.
    Very nicely written. Those arms sound very safe and strong
    Mia