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Oisin's Music (del.)

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Due to legal stipulations to the contract on a manuscript
I'm working on, this poem has been deleted from the site...
I didn't want to lose all of these wonderful comments, which
happens when you delete a poem, so I've done it this way to
preserve them...

If you read this, please don't mention it to anyone...LOL...

I'll post the link on my author's page when & IF the book
becomes available...possibly in a few months to a year's time...
Say a lil' prayer for me...
                 
January 3, 2006

Author notes

His words are filled with Peace & Serenity...a Wisdom borne of living in the natural World...Lovely poems, indeed...well~worth reading...

www.allpoetry.com/poets/Oisin


Written September 13th, 2005

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  • Night Hope gold member
    December 27, 2005
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    Just thought I'd let you know, my Friend...I had this poem entered in a contest & it just won a bronze trophy...& there were a lot of entries, too... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    December 24, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words & for hosting a great contest, Shancy...I'm glad you liked it...Be well, Poet...Happy Holidays... Wanda


  • Shancy Fayre
    December 24, 2005
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    This is very beautiful. It is so well written and such a pleasure to read. Thank you for entering my contest and good luck. Shancy.

  • Night Hope gold member
    December 23, 2005
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    Thank you for hosting, externalalias...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda


  • externalalias
    December 23, 2005
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    I like the nature theme in this, gives us all a clear picture of how you descibe the poet, better than mundane philosphical chunter some poets come out with! lol, love the poem, thanks!
    Alias xxx

  • Night Hope gold member
    December 22, 2005
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    Thanks, Bon...I'm sure glad ya feel that way, my Friend... Wanda


  • BonnieQ silver member
    December 22, 2005
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    Gorgeous

    Dearest Wanda, I would have to say that your quill is ever as wonderous as that of your friend, Oisin. Of course, I'm never disappointed when I read one of your poems. Best wishes in the contest!

    Love and hugs, B♥nnieQ


  • Night Hope gold member
    November 27, 2005
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    Thank you, Coralfang19...that's a great compliment, indeed...I have written rhymes before, along with haiku, tanka & cinquains, even a sonnet or two...But I mostly write free verse...I'm gratified to know you enjoyed it...Thanks for comin' by...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Coralfang19
    November 27, 2005
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    I usually don't like poems that don't rhyme but this one is definately an exception. It flowed so nicely it didn't need to rhyme. Keep up the great work and good luck in the contest.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    Thank you, Kelsy...I'm glad you liked it...Thanks for hosting a great contest...Be well, Poet...By the way, it was my Friend Kelsey that led me to AP in June 2004...if you go to my author's page, you'll see an amazing picture of a swan she did for me last year at the age of 14...My nickname is Swanee... Wanda


  • October 19, 2005
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    Very nice poem it is very inspiritation Kelsy


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 2, 2005
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    Well, happy belated birthday then, Pinky...mine was on the 24th... I'm glad you liked it...Thanks for havin' a great contest...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • EmsandAbs
    October 2, 2005
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    I liek htis... mainly because it was wrttne on my birthdya... jsut playing.. i lieked this becuase it was very descriptive and easy for me to read i liekd this alot
    greta poem my favorite part was:
    Your pen
    paints a subtle portrait
    of gentle kisses
    on the page,

    whispering secret
    endearments
    to your Beloved's eyes...
    -Pinky


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 25, 2005
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    If you like this one, Tiya, you should read the Poet that inspired it...Oisin is amazing...Thanks for a great contest... Wanda

    www.allpoetry.com/poets/Oisin

  • vertigo beat
    September 24, 2005
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    a absolutely beautiful poem, it left me in awe, reading the words out loud was enough for me to be shocked, I loved it, such imagery and use of words, I really don't know what to say....this was a great write...Keep Writing...
    ~^~Tiya~^~


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    Yes, that was my intent, Robin...his words are well~worth your Time, my Friend...such tranquility within his pennings...please do go read...you'll be thankin' me, too... I've already received IM's from people with their profuse gratitude for highlighting his work...well??? When I find Treasure, 'tis in my Nature to share it...Love ya, Lady...will be by in awhile to check out your newest...I know it's gonna be good...I consider the source... By the way, Natari Moon has me on her page as the Featured Poet of the Week...I am so Honoured!!! I love it...we tend each other... Wanda


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 15, 2005
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    What a wonderful way to pay thanks to another poet. So well done. See what you've done, now I have to go check out their works I saw the title and it drew me in. I just wrote one that references music in the title too...so of course I had to come see. Well done sweetheart!

    ~Lyrical


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks, Karen...If you're not familiar with Oisin's work, you ought to go read...very tranquil...I appreciate ya, my Friend... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you, James...& you oughta know, my Friend...I see a flicker from over that direction, as well... Wanda


  • Theater Of Dreams
    September 13, 2005
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    Very touching.

    Another gift of healing for the tattered soul. Wonderful exhibition of the light in all living things...


  • klassy lassy
    September 13, 2005
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    Another poem which makes me sigh. I want to feel that infinite song of grace and love. You write of it so beautifully...and at 4:00 a.m., too. The plants in the accompanying picture are gorgeous!


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    You just missed my reply to Poet sunny day, Oisin; I repeat it for you now...& you are most welcome, my Friend...'tis my Honour... Wanda

    ' Thank you, Joyce...I glad this one 'took you on a trip'...now, if you'd like to go on a Journey, go read Oisin's words...beautiful words on his pages, my Friend... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you, Joyce...I glad this one 'took you on a trip'...now, if you'd like to go on a Journey, go read Oisin's words...beautiful words on his pages, my Friend... Wanda


  • Oisin silver member
    September 13, 2005
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    Where love lingers we often need to share a common ground with others.

    thank you friend.

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you, more5600...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks for a lovely comment, SufferingFool...(Hopefully, you do it gladly) I'm glad you enjoyed it...please feel free to come by my pages & read, anytime...I welcome your Thoughts...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you, CoolHandLuke...you should read the Poet that inspired this piece...'twas him that put me in this place of Serenity...Thanks for reading... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    'Flows like warm honey over toast', eh, Eddy??? First ya sing to me, then ya make me hungry, is that it??? Thank you, my Friend...I'm glad ya liked it... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks, Amazigh...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks, Karen...please do go read his words...such gentleness of Thought... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks for reading, Tanya...I'm glad you liked it... Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you for reading...

  • emm
    September 13, 2005
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    I like the last two stanzas especially. it gives me a sense of the wind blowing for thousands of years, unending. Very nice image, and unforgettable.


  • darell
    September 13, 2005
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    Magical!

    WOW!! GIRLFRIEND YOU SHOULD BE WRITTING FOR HALLMARK!
    Your work is scrumptiously delicious! The visuals.
    The sentiments. The passion. Sigh....
    What a huge talent you are!
    Breathe some of that magical dust on me!
    Edited on Sep 13, 3:21 p.m. because ''.


  • AerinAlanna
    September 13, 2005
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    I love the poem, Lady Poet, but the picture does not match it in grace or elegance, I am afraid to say. The poem has the strength of water, wearing away rock, and any poet would be honored to have it written of them.


  • sunny day
    September 13, 2005
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    So Breathtaking!!!

    Wanda, You've done it again!!! Wowwwwwwww...so beautiful!!!!!
    The picture you used and the ones your words created are fabulous. This was so serene and it flowed softly and sweetly through my mind as I read on. Fall colors create wonderful pictures, I love foliage trips. This just took me on one of the best trips ever. Joyce


  • AJ Morelli gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    A lovely write -Al


  • mikesbooty
    September 13, 2005
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    The picture is a bit too computer generated for my taste. The poem is too beautiful for it. It deserves its own picture being made especially for it. Imagery made wonderful. Your words were done well. Good job.

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks, Pierre...Glad ya liked it... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks, Moon Girl...I think you'd enjoy his work, if you haven't already...Harmonious...Love ya, Helen... ♥ Wanda

  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks, Reenie...please do...it's well worth your Time... Wanda


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you for your candor, Nimbus; it's a rarity around here, as I'm sure you know...I'll look at it again, but I like it as is & once I've posted something, I usually don't edit after the fact...too much work, as many as I write...sometimes, I carry the thoughts or feelings into the next piece & rework it there...it is a continuing Journey, after all...I appreciate your Time...I'm glad you enjoyed it, at any rate...Be well, Poet... Wanda


  • September 13, 2005
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    I hear the River
    caressing its banks
    with a wondrous sigh
    of Contentment
    & Grace...

    What a beautiful stanza...this is a wonderful piece of art, painted out for us all to read and enjoy. This is great! Thank you so much for putting this up on featured for us all to read and enjoy. Keep that ink flowing, because your poems brightens the day for us who enjoy reading poetry.


  • CoolHandLuke
    September 13, 2005
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    Astonishing work...you really put the readers into your spectrum of thought and mindset. Very clean, very nice.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    {gets out the smelling salts & large doses of poetry to inject & breathe Life back into your bones} Heyyy, don'tcha be dyin' on my pages now, sara... If you like this one, ya oughta check out the Poet that inspired me to write it...talk 'bout relaxing...Thanks, my Friend...Glad you enjoyed it... Wanda


  • Piscean soul
    September 13, 2005
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    *dies in love*
    I love it Wanda
    Such a relaxing write.


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Dearest Muddy... I am shocked!!! & dismayed!!! that you detest a bunch of exclamation marks!!!!!! Sowwy, Scribe...couldn't hep mahsef... Thanks for your lovely words, my Friend...I'm pleased you liked this one...along with your newest, it seems we were both out wanderin' in the woods, eh??? ♥ Wanderer


  • ShatteredSilverStar
    September 13, 2005
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    it's sweet, like nature's way of loving it's pieces..i hear the river caressing it's banks..i love that line..thanks for posting!
    tanya


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you, Dee...I appreciate such a thoughtful comment, my Friend...I only hold onto the pen...sometimes, for dear Life... Ohhh, alright...usually... Thanks for reading, Lady... Wanda


  • Ink Shadow
    September 13, 2005
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    While I like the passionate feeling in this page, I believe you wont mind if I pick on some issues like over use of excess imagery, after your second strophe till second last there is nothing new...all the images convey same thought without movements. I see your imagery is good, but if the images transmute into one another it will be even more gorgeous!

    D


  • MuddyKing
    September 13, 2005
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    The trees and the forest, shaded me deep into this. It led me to a serene feel. This is sweet (would put many exclamation marks after this, but I detest them)
    Peace Muddy


  • SimpleSarcasm
    September 13, 2005
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    What poetic lovliness! You have such a lovely heart that creeps itself out on page. This is just a wonderful, wonderful write.

    ~Dee


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Oisin, your so~called 'simple thoughts on love' are a pure distillation of something of such immense complexity that it has stupified even the finest Poets for eons...never underestimate the power of your words, my Friend...Aside from that, (as if that were not enough!!!) from a more practical aspect, I suffer from insomnia, as is attested by the time I wrote this piece: 4 a.m. ~ after reading a few of your beautiful poems, I was lulled towards Peace...I finally slept, & slept deeply & well...for this, I thank you immeasureably...the Dreams I had were serene...This is not taken lightly by me at all, my Friend...it is a Gift of the highest caliber...my late Sweetheart used to talk to me & read to me in the most soothing voice one could imagine...Reading your words had much the same effect...Thank you, Oisin, for sharing your Gift with all of us...'specially me... Be well, Poet... Wanda

  • Just4u
    September 13, 2005
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    Flows like warm honey over toast...

    Hugs...Eddy


  • Abdul T Alishtari
    September 13, 2005
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    Belissimo and more

    Wonderful, all that and a little extra.


  • transcendental baby gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    I'm going to have to check him out ... this tribute is lovely in your gentle, peaceful imaginative way


  • Oisin silver member
    September 13, 2005
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    Your poem sings out on this his page. I do not think a simple “thank you" would ever say enough, to know my simple thoughts on love are understood by poets of the caliber I see here.
    Edited on Sep 13, 6:02 because ''.


  • Pierre Richards
    September 13, 2005
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    excellent!

    Beautifully penned my friend!
    A lovely piece that flows smoothly across the page.
    well done!


  • natari gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    A beautiful tribute my friend and you have done an excellent job of penning about another's ablility to reach his readers.As do you Helen


  • cherche -d -ame
    September 13, 2005
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    this is a beautiful write in itself as well as a great tribute to a fellow poet. It is so grand that indeed i will have to make it a point to look up the writer that inspired your Muse with these beautiful words,
    xo
    Reenie


  • Night Hope gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    I'd only read a couple of his before, I think...He commented on mine the other night & I've been reading quite a few of his this morning...utter tranquility...very beautiful writing...He is quite gifted...Thanks for coming by, Steve...I'm glad you liked it...He deserves it... Wanda


  • quietly burning
    September 13, 2005
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    he writes beautifully, Nic and I have been reading his things for quite a while. very generous and kind of u to write this piece.

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