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Daydreams

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Delicate and lovely
is the view that she sees
outside her balcony window
A land of lush green
woods and trees
where the birds sing
and the flowers grow
She lives here in this beauty
in peaceful solitude
where to her everyday
is dress up day
She dresses for the ball
that the King will be holding
in his castle way up high
She carries her invitation in hand
awaiting her coach and driver
for a night of dining and dancing
under the bright moonlight
The night is nearly over
time for her to sleep
another night of daydreams
another night without her King

Delicate and lovely
is the view that he sees
outside his balcony window
in his castle way up high
He lives here in this beauty
in peaceful solitude
where to him everyday
is the day of his Grand Ball
He awaits for his Queen to arrive
in her coach he has sent for her
where a night of dining and dancing
will turn to love under the bright moonlight
The night is almost over
time for him to sleep
another night of daydreams
another night without his Queen

~Lady Raven~

Author notes

Making sure I am writing soft.  Helps keep the ickys away a little.
Written September 12th, 2005

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  • Scarlet Ambrosia
    September 14, 2005
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    ahhhh.. such a lovely piece.....
    I sure enjoyed reading this one
    wonderfully penned mum
    Angel


  • Theater Of Dreams
    September 13, 2005
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    Thank you hun, for sharing your heart, and your gifts. You are never alone.


  • vampira1665 silver member
    September 13, 2005
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    I simply love this piece. It is sad yes, cuz they arent together but the posibilities of them meeting are endless. And the best part of all is the peaceful serene place they both live. Thanks!

    Hugs, Tisha

  • Theater Of Dreams
    September 13, 2005
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    ASTOUNDING.

    Oh good god.
    THIS IS AMAZING! You kicked some serious tail with this- I am so impressed! it should be a trophy winner! See? look what you still possess! What a gift to all of us! I am so proud of you. Just beautiful. I think I have another FAVE!!!


  • Fairy Moon
    September 13, 2005
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    This is very nice. Lovely poem. I want to to this place and be treated like a Queen. ~~Shannon~~


  • robert bolin
    September 13, 2005
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    This is very, very , beautiful it's as if your heart and mind are gracefuly singing a duet with you each time you write these amazing poems, you have inspired me into writes I would never have come up with before and your penning of these words and emotions to me are beyond powerful and brilliant you are the poet of all poets, I bow to you..


  • goddesskevauna
    September 13, 2005
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    Mmm! It is very nice. Heh, very delicate. And yes, it does have a soft touch to it. sigh Daydreaming is nice!

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