I lie awake at night,
Under the stars so bright,
Drifting into a life unknown.
Missing you all wherever you are,
It's hard being kind of far,
Many times I feel alone.
Staring at the stars, moon, and sky,
Countless are the nights where I'd cry,
Hidden behind glossy eyes lies pain never shown.
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Written July 1st, 2005
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great emotion writing this is written from the heart these are the poems I like the best great writing wish you the best of luck....
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written with emotions, the loneliness and despair you have written down your pain, well written poem keep your chin up ...all will be well God bless
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very nice pain is trouble when hidden
keep doing well
love the papa -
It seems like you are separated from the ones you love and are trying to endure the loneliness. It's always at night, that the loneliness hurts the most. You captured your emotions well in this write-hidden behind brown eyes is the pain no one sees....well done!~vj
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well put and very well done
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alsome
i love this poem i can really relate good luck to you keep on writting -
i understand how you are feeling...i was engaged and the guy broke up with me....i felt all alone..I think you did a very good job...it is short..but shows a lot of emotion
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Hey this is a superb write.....sad but very meaningful....
Thanks for commenting on my poem and also for recommending this poem to me.
I am really glad to read this....thanks again.
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i am having great luck tonight with this 'return a favo' button... i really like this though i have to say i didn't reallu read it... i sang it in my head. excellent
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Exceptional!!
wow! this is beautiful!
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