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Tion Governmental Double Talk



While cataclysmic devastation
is no reason for celebration,
Transformation is alteration's
way of education's illumination.

Mediation's deliberational fixation
results in illumination's stagnation.
For he who deliberates is lost.
Who can know essential cost!

Organization's hesitational infatuation
creates animosities obliteration infestation.
Litigation brought on by justification distillation
remedies population's actionable annihilation.

In short,please don't make us resort,
to governmental tort in superior court.
Executive impeachment expellation,
Presidential humiliation degradation.


       ~~Suseann~~

 

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Written September 12th, 2005

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  • Rune Morose
    September 17, 2005
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    Nice work. I had no idea what to make of the title until I was through the first verse. "Tion? What's a tion? Duurrr." Some awesome rhyming here, but I don't think the President has to be impeached in order for him to be humiliated. He does plenty of that all by himself.


  • Emerald13
    September 17, 2005
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    so well crafted .... the rhyming and all those 'tions' give it a machine gun repetition to it that moves you through the message which has quite a punch .... nicely done >>>> EM

  • ecrivain01
    September 16, 2005
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    Beaucoup plus mieux.

    Thanks.


  • suseann
    September 16, 2005
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    Now it's white.I think it might be a bit easier on the eyes.Thanks for the tip.~~Suseann

  • ecrivain01
    September 16, 2005
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    good job

    This has got to be one of the best poems you've ever written. It's got heart and it's got soul and your font is too damned dark.


  • Oisin silver member
    September 12, 2005
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    I don't know that many "ions", but I do like this. I have never been political with my poems........I am afraid of where they would go.

    very nice,


  • Lyrical Soul silver member
    September 12, 2005
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    I agree with LionHeart....dang my tongue is tied I saw the title and thought "what the heck does she mean by Tion"... Now I know. Wow suseann. This is great girl!!

    ~Lyrical


  • Malabu
    September 12, 2005
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    suseann wanna read somehting funny lol
    allpoetry.com/Poem/1461656
    lol tff.
    Mally

  • suseann
    September 12, 2005
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    Couldn't agree with unity one voice more.I live to politically activate.Child of the sixties.Rebel with a clue.~~Suseann

  • Malabu
    September 12, 2005
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    magnificent!

    gee lotta big explicit words I must go look up....but if you ask me....this says much to my understanding that we are slowly or much more rapidly losing grip on freedom....we are fools.....we cant blame nobody but ourselves...for we sit back and dont gather our power as a unit....to do the things neccessary like the last lines in this wonderfully exressed writing,,,
    Executive impeachment expellation,
    Presidential humiliation degradation..... I say...magnificent...sussie..
    Huggs and I applaud you..
    Mally

    Edited on Sep 12, 8:08 p.m. because ''.


  • Lionheart
    September 12, 2005
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    Whew! I THINK MY TONGUE IS TIED. I could never write something like this with out a dictionary in front of me and then it would take hours. Great job, my friend.


  • misticmoonlite gold member
    September 12, 2005
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    wow such a true poem good write

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