Sun in the distance
Bouncing upon lapping waves
Ponders when to set
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Written September 12th, 2005
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beautiful haiku
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A beautiful haiku. Lovely imagery. You paint a lovely picture with this piece. Well crafted and a much enjoyed read.
ShelleyA -
A lovely image and excellent use of personification of the sun pondering when to set. I like the idea and the image. Good work.
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This is a lovely haiku. Your personification of the sun is very nice and well placed. I think you did a wonderful job, and with the right number of syllables too.
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oh I love haikus. This one is lovely, and you chose the perfect background. It's awesome how you were able to put that image in my mind. well done.
Aura
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Well done first and foremost for attempting and succeeding at writing a haiku. I have tried to in the past and can never find the right words to get across my message... You have done just that perfectly here. This is beautiful, and does what a haiku does best.. which is to conjure up a beautiful image and to leave the reader contemplating. Well done! And thanks again for commenting on my poem! xxx
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Wow......This is really good. It kinda puts a picture in your mind.
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This is a nice haiku. It sets an image and leave me to imagine....I like it.
LIZ
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