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Keep An Eye On Summer

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The Beach Boys' music was the soundtrack of my youth
and in their fun, wholesome songs, I found a lot of truth.
Brian Wilson once said he "wasn't made for these times"
When his heart was hurting and he'd run out of rhymes.
Neither was I.  I was born just a little too late
To be a part of the world his songs celebrate
But the Beach Boys were a huge influence on me
And they helped me become who I wanted to be
When I was just a teenager, sad and alone in my room,
Dreaming of Hawaiian islands from my adolescent gloom;
Of having a car club that would look like a Hot Wheels convention.
Cruising up and down the strip, we would get all the attention
In brightly painted Little Deuce Coupe's and 409's
With fun-loving, sun-worshiping friends of mine;  
Of going to the drive-in and the high school sock hop; 
Of driving old woodies with longboards piled on top
On surfin' safari's searching for the perfect wave; 
Having fun all summer long with no need to behave
With Caroline, Barbara Ann, Wendy and Rhonda,
Riding through the hills at night on my Little Honda.  
And of course, spray-painted on the wall of our high school
Would be the absolute law of the universe - Surfer's Rule!

I grew up at the beach but moved inland when I was a kid
And I can't tell you what all those old Beach Boys songs did 
For my young soul, trapped in the city.  I was fascinated
By the happy, beautiful world that their songs created.
They gave me hope of how fun life would someday be 
And promised that someday, I would finally be free
And they were right because I found my surfer girl
And we shared a perfect summer in a perfect world.
We spent every day at the beach in the warmth of the sun 
Exploring the tidepools and having nothing but fun fun fun,
My friends and I were kings of a sun-blessed land
With our feet full of tar and our hair full of sand.
There wasn't one mile of PCH that we didn't roam,
Our cars silhouetted by the sunset on the way home.
My girlfriend would fall asleep lying across the front seat
As I fought to keep my eyes open, surfed out and beat.
I would look down at the soft moonlight shining on her hair
And smile with the knowledge that she'd always be there.

Wouldn't it be nice if those times could have lasted longer?
Back when the Spirit of America was a whole lot stronger.
Back in the days when I didn't know all the things I do now
and all the heroes and villains weren't so scary somehow.

Can you imagine a song today called Be True To Your School
In these jaded times, I'm afraid many would think it's uncool.
Or what about the sweet, innocent fun of Dance Dance Dance?
Nowadays, it seems songs like that just don't stand a chance.

Many years have passed since I was a kid singing I Get Around.
Those scratched-up albums still don't hinder the beautiful sound
Of the five-part harmonies The Beach Boys are so famous for
And they're still making good vibrations just like they did before.

They made me wonder what I'd be when I grew up to be a man.
I became a beach boy myself, with sun-bleached hair and a tan.
It's hard to find any time to go surfing these days, it seems  
But I still catch a wave every now and then in my dreams.

My old surfing pals have all gone their separate ways
But sometimes, my mind wanders back to those days.
I still keep an eye on summer and the old excitement's still there
For the beautiful girls on the beach in the sun and the salty air.

I don't know if this world is getting darker or if it's just me
But I still dream of escaping to Hawaii so that I can feel free.
I look out at the lonely sea and think of all the fun back then
and I wish we could all get back together and do it again.

Adult life can sure be hard sometimes, God only knows.
I'm not complaining because this is the life that I chose
But when I'm discouraged or worrying more than I should . . . 
I just turn on the Beach Boys, and hey, life's still pretty good.




A couple of photos from those days.  See, I wasn't always so conservative!  haha






 


Author notes

I couldn't decide on a single song so I just weaved a bunch of Beach Boys songs into the poem itself.  (In italics.)  "Keep An Eye On Summer" is a Beach Boys song, too.

Thanks for the cool contest idea.  It's about time I wrote a tribute to these guys!  lol

My friends and I were such big fans, we swore we would create a band just like The Beach Boys.  After much deliberation about what to call ourselves, we decided on "The Beach Boys II".  hahaha  Real creative, huh?  (That was before we knew about copyright laws, etc.  lol


"I Wasn't Made For These Times" lyrics -

I keep looking for a place to fit
Where I can speak my mind.
I've been trying hard to find the people
That I won't leave behind.

They say I got brains
But they ain't doing me no good.
I wish they could.

Each time things start to happen again.
I think I got something good goin' for myself.
But what goes wrong?

Sometimes I feel very sad.
Sometimes I feel very sad.
(Can't find nothin' I can put my heart and soul into.)
Sometimes I feel very sad.
(Can't find nothin' I can put my heart and soul into.)
I guess I just wasn't made for these times.

Every time I get the inspiration
To go change things around,
No one wants to help me look for places
Where new things might be found.

Where can I turn when my fair weather friends cop out?
What's it all about?

Each time things start to happen again,
I think I got something good goin' for myself.
But what goes wrong?

Sometimes I feel very sad
Sometimes I feel very sad.
(Can't find nothin' I can put my heart and soul into.)
Sometimes I feel very sad.
(Can't find nothin' I can put my heart and soul into.)

I guess I just wasn't made for these times.


Written September 12th, 2005

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  • fool no1
    October 3, 2005
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    Smashing tribute , hey !! and thanks for the memories...mal
  • Bobbing Around
    September 28, 2005
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    Always Cool

    Mark my old friend.

    Your right! I have been away from AP for too long, doing work and having work done to me (not that kind of work!). I picked a good day to read Keep an Eye on Summer. The day is full of the end of summer… right now… a warm September day with some off shores blowing. Kids are back in school and the beach is ripe for the plucking. You are reminding me that I need to get back to what is important. Sooooo when are we going to paddle out? I am three weeks over due and the salt water is calling, as well it has been over 20yrs since I sat up after a hard paddle, looked over, and said “hey dude”. I loved the pic’s of you in your youth. I know the day is coming; I am waiting with adventurous anticipation.

    I will get to, getting around to, posting some more as soon as the “Boss” lets up.

    Hope the concert was fun, sorry I could not make it. I know it would have been pretty cool. Thank you again for the invitation.

    Bob

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    September 24, 2005
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    What a coincidence - your favorite BB song is Sloop John B and you're name is John B. lol It's so cool that your brother went to high school with the Wilson's! Those must have been great times to live in California.

    Thanks for stopping by.

    Mark

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    Thanks. Yeah, I did work pretty hard on it, and still am. I always think a poem is finished and then end up adding and cutting and tweeking for a few weeks. That's the nice thing about posting on the internet. You can edit and edit until you finally can say, "Okay, it's done!" lol

    Anyway, as you know, I loved your poem, too. You painted quite a picture. Thanks again.

    Mark

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    September 13, 2005
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    "Boys of the Beach". Hmmm . . . That has a nice ring. Maybe it's not too late! lol
  • Transylvania
    September 13, 2005
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    you should of went with the name Boys of the Beach lol

  • Sandygram silver member
    September 13, 2005
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    WONDERFUL POEM

    Wow Mark you just amaze me with this poem. Their music will stand forever. Everytime I hear one played I drift back to my childhood. Wonderful memories of a much more innocent time. It is ashame what our children and grandchildren listen to today. It makes you wonder how did things change in such a rather short time. You are so right about the song "Be True To Your School. I know now why they call them "Oldies But Goodies", it's because there are not many good songs today that will stand the test of time like they will. I went to an old fashion amusement park this past weekend (not one of those big theme parks)and the band at the Pavilion played all the songs from the 50's and 60's. There were so many older couples dancing to them in front of the bandstand. It was so nice. Thanks so much for a beautiful poem that reminded me of some beautiful memories. You are one talented writer. Take care, Sandy
    Edited on Sep 13, 4:44 because ''.

  • Grieving-Willow
    September 12, 2005
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    You could never be arrogant and hard to live with... you are way to wonderful to ever be that way...

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    September 12, 2005
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    That's for sure (about their music being more tasteful than most of the music today). Look at the beautiful simplicity of these lyrics to their song In My Room -

    There’s a world where
    I can go and tell my secrets to.
    In my room, in my room.
    In this world I
    lock out all my worries and my fears.
    In my room, in my room.

    Do my dreaming and my scheming.
    Lie awake and pray.
    Do my crying and my sighing.
    Laugh at yesterday.

    Now it’s dark and I’m alone
    But I won’t be afraid
    In my room, in my room.


    Be careful calling my work a "masterpiece". I'm going to get arrogant and hard to live with. lol



    Mark
    Edited on Sep 12, 8:04 p.m. because ''.

  • GunsGoBang
    September 12, 2005
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    hey nice poem and i think it brings back alot of memories i liked it alot ~*Erin*~

  • grannyeri gold member
    September 12, 2005
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    Reminded me of songs I had forgot about. yeah, the songs of my youth - brings back lots of memories of who I was with, where we were and what we were doing when thrse songs are sung. Loved your poem.

  • glispa
    September 12, 2005
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    a brilliant piece of writing , i do believe, the beach boys are eternal
  • Painpoet
    September 12, 2005
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    Very well done i grew up with the Beach Boys litterly, my borther graduated with Brian.I have know them and thier music for years this is a well done read But ya let out my favorite Sloop John B

  • NoWayJo
    September 12, 2005
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    are both the postings your poems? I like the Beach Boys music too, but my husband is a huger fan than I. I believe he had known one of them personally. He'll enjoy reading these poems and I'll send him your name so that he can locate to read it.
    It must be fun to write a Beach Boys poem--It was fun to read!!!

  • Providence
    September 12, 2005
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    Oh but isn't it great to put on the old Beach Boy Albums (Oops CDs I'm showing my age) and pretend we are young and innocent again!
    Thanks for the memories!

  • Mark Rickerby gold member
    September 12, 2005
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    Hey Chuck,

    Thank you for your characteristically poetic response. I loved it. And you're right - only ONE of the Beach Boys actually surfed! lol (I think it was Brian.)

    Staircase and Malibu were two of my favorite spots. Staircase is a local name (there are no signs for that beach) so I know you know that of which you speak! I've always loved the winding trail down to the beach at Staircase (thus the name) and that first glimpse of the ocean as you approach the cliff. Heaven!

    What a contrast it must have been surfing in California one day then trudging through the jungles of Vietnam the next. I'm glad you made it back, brother. And as always, thanks for my freedom.

    If you're ever in California again, let me know. We can both visit Staircase again.

    Take care, buddy

    Mark

  • Chuck Johnson silver member
    September 12, 2005
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    I remember them well growing up in their wake,
    on every trip their 8 track I would take.
    I remember their voices and guitars that strum,
    vivid memories now faded for some.

    I remember their funny walks and talks,
    as they capered around ...but u know..

    NOT ONE SINGLE TIME DID I SEE THEM ON A SURF BOARD!!! lol.

    Not in the ocean anyway! I left school with 16 days to go for my senior year...I was drafted and heading for the Nam. Screw school, they were losing 550 a day there. My chances of returning were slim. So I went surfing... didn't know how, but Malibu and Staircase ..somehow they called. I tried and tried and drank sea water, and enjoyed the few weeks until the Army swore me in. I've never been back, but I play those songs. I play them and listen and remember....

  • Grieving-Willow
    September 12, 2005
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    Wonderful

    This is a great poem, Obviously, I wasn't old enough to listen to the Beach Boys when they were a hit and were making hits but I always listened to the song about the states... Can't remember the title of that song, My history teacher, he is in his 50's and the Beach Boys is still his favorite music band and when I was in his class that song was always playing... You, as always, made a masterpiece, wonderful tribute to the Beach Boys, which their music is no bout more tasteful than most music that you hear nowadays. Love you Sara

  • Maureen silver member
    September 12, 2005
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    The Beach Boys' songs are a celebration of life! They make me feel great! Enjoyed your poem and your tribute to them! Fun! Fun! Fun! Good, good, good vibrations!

    ♥ Maureen
  • Ankeeta silver member
    September 12, 2005
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    oh how wrong you were to think that I wont like this! I did like it! ...though I am not aware of this band but I think these beach boys had been interesting like your poem!!!!

  • fae
    September 12, 2005
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    I love this Mark! I'm only 33 but grew up listening to the Beach Boy's too. Always makes me smile Excellent tribute and writing here
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