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Silhouette Of Romantic Darkness

This is for the lovers, embracing in arms
Going the distance, seeing no sullen vista
Wanting, desiring the fervor of it all
Romance to the silence of the midnight
It is time to order the chaos
Into existence and out of the exile
Lust to the shadows in eternal black mass
Bleeding upon moonlight roses
Feeling the pulse of a lover's romance
How long has thou hast wait?
For tonight is the night
Wailing rites to the gravesite
Roaming all in hurricanist path
I am here for you
Never to part, lest phallus purgatori taketh away
From us is a gray rose
Upon the rain and beneath the mist
I sanction great fervor for thee
And this passion I sacrifice for you
From me to the soul of you
I die in unholy passing
For you
The silhouette of romantic darkness

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Written September 11th, 2005

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  • shubs
    October 20, 2005
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    You ar too modest..and my words were not at all kind these were the manifestations of the feelings I harboured after reading what was on display from your eloquent hands..keep penning these wonderful writes..but others need to taste this fantastic delicacy..right?==Shubs


  • kenny-streetcrazy
    October 20, 2005
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    I appreciate your kind words. I just try to write down my feelings and express true love. Like Sam Kinison said about love and romance, "I try to do the best I can...I am only trying to help others on love". I am doing that very thing. True love is greater than any other love. Well, thank you for commenting. You are a magnifiscent poet as well. Live on and live again. Cya

  • shubs
    October 20, 2005
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    Brilliant

    Bravo!Absolutely stunning and no flattery this I just went over and over this depiction and i cannot copy paste the whole poem in this rectangular box..for no one line out here is my fav..they all cascade in torrents...the silhouette of romantic darkness a fantastic title..and the contents are no different..Shubs