Though autumn colors fall and fade
The gift of memories grow with age
If I can share a life with you
We'd grow a tree that would only bloom
Leaves, that never fall, would grow
Time rain wind and snow,
Will weather all but us you know,
Our lives and love, would bring lives anew
A boy a girl one or two,
How many we have it’s up to you
But I know with each passing day
The one’s we raise will always say,
“I love you mom you are the best”
“And dad’s alright but can’t pass the test.”
So let us start a world anew,
With peace and love and passion too
You with me and me with you
Come on love just say "I do!"
Author notes
Written September 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- True love wanted by beebee2003.
500 points, ended September 12, 2005, 3 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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beautiful
I miss you! -
It's beautiful, josh.
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YAY!! this was really really great.. I'm glad to read something new from you.. I stand amazed..lol.. but for real great write hun..
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awww..made me smile..what an awesome way to propose..you made me blush
love,
beth -
sweet
Aw, this was so romantically cute! It made me smile
. I hope you do well. Good luck in the contest, hon! ~Syd (P.S. Glad to see new poems from you)
Edited on Sep 12, 1:26 because 'typo'.
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