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tomorrow

this day of mine
i weep and wallow
hoping theres
no tomorrow
the sun didnt shine
the grass wasnt green
a typical day
of being a teen
my hearts in his hand
and he doesnt know
its not really a secret
so ill let it show
i look at the stars
it reminds me of him
he makes my heart shine
my worlds no longer dim
my hand in his
his arms around me
the love and the romance
is all i can see
thats what i wish
thats what i want
but this bad day
is just a taunt
the sun dont shine
on my cloudy day
i hope tomorrow
will be okay

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Written September 11th, 2005

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  • Crazi Beautyful
    November 2, 2005
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    So true!!!!!


  • Babyruth714
    September 13, 2005
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    enjoyed reading this piece hun, short lines but with such powerful emotion, consitent flow, great imagery, very somber tone, I could relate to this piece, great write! Ruth


  • Crazi Beautyful
    September 13, 2005
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    unbeleiveable!!!!!!!!!


  • rising-2-be-seen
    September 11, 2005
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    omFg that is soooo true!! US TEENS HAVE IT HARDER! lol i bet all the Adults are all "wtf? they dont know how easy they have it!" haha BULLSHIT! if they knew what we went through they would stop bitching at us! AM I RIGHT?? or am i right?? lol

    i loved it you tend to be writing alot of sad love poems lately!
    im sorry you feel like this alot!
    I LOVE YOU HANNAH!!!!!

    ♥*~*Jovana*~*♥