Picture this, if you can.
A little moonlit path,
With large trees and spanish moss,
Hand-in-hand with Your Beloved.
Walking together, not saying much,
Listening to Mother Nature.
You suddenly stop,
Your Beloved turns to you.
Looking into those loving deep eyes,
Everything is alright.
Your Beloved slips their arms around you,
Warmly pulls you in close,
Kisses you tenderly, and wispers:
"I love you," ever so softly.
Standing there on the path,
The only humans for miles,
Holding each other, so in love,
You never want it to end.
Author notes
ok ok ok, i kno its a lil sappy..........
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Written September 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Beautiful by Lestat de lioncourt.
300 points, ended September 17, 2005, 15 entries
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sounds wonderful, im glad u liked it, and how do i become a creator??
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awwwwwwwwwwwwww, this is very cuuuuuuuuuuuute....... if it was just a bit more cute it would have made me throw up a little(that's not such a bad thing u know
)..... ya i wish i could do that with THE BELOVED one.......
great write, keep it up, and good luck in the contest
janie
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this is lovely!(I'm streching the 'Lovely')i mean this is great!it's like the perfect picture of a romantic evening!i love this to the core!infact i think i'm going to find a beloved and see what it feels like!i love this!i love this1you should consider being a Creator(not exactly like God but some where near Him)cos you describe a scenery so well.bravo!!! i love this!!!good work!
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this was awesome your talented
Mortikie -
i like it if only
it were true lol
great write good
luck in the contest
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This is the best poem I have read in the longest time, I love it. ^_^ That's what I wait for my boyfriend and I to do for ourn first kiss. ^^;;; But I love it, I hope you win because this is a very well writen poem. Good luck in the contest.
~*Tk
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