I'm sick of you
I'm sick of begging for your attention
All your kisses and cuddles
I'm tired of waiting around
for you
I'm tired of being disapointed
Your sweet words are nothing anymore
I love you so much
I know you love me
But I'm sick of getting hurt
My heart hurts so much sometimes
I can't sleep
I dont want to love you anymore
I'm sick of you
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okay so this is a really crappy poem but i dont care! Im just mad and hurt and im about to cry again...Im so tired of this.
Written September 11th, 2005
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Amazing,...Thank you.
I love this poem!!! Its short and simple because it says everything it needs to with out any extra words! Its very real and just lays out the truth. No sugar coating. I love it...Made me think of my dad...I can really and truely relate to this. Thank you so much for sharing. -
everyone at some point or another will feel like this, hey, simplicity is never a bad thing. good job xXx
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yo whats up babes ?
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This isn't bad at all! There are two kinds of poetry, the way I see it: the ones that have form and deeper meaning and people love picking them apart and interpreting them. Then there's the kind that are pure emotion and make you feel what the author felt without using metaphors or trying to hide it with fancy schmancy words when simpler ones work best. And now that I've had my rant, I will say I prefer the second kind. You seem to have made a lot of people feel with this poem, I know I did. I love it when I come across something that makes me think, "Wow, this person could have been writing about my life!" and that's what I did here. I'm sorry this is long and pointless, I had coffee this morning and I'm crazy.
I loved this, and I hope things get better for you! 
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good
Olivia hun, this is not a bad poem. You are telling us what you are feeling. Sometimes we all feel this way. Well I will chat with you latter.
Amanda -
hey this is a great poem well done i can really see the feeling in this poem luv max hope to tlk to u agen sometime
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Its not crappy if it has true emotion in it...and IT DOES! YAY! I can definetly relate to this, as i'm sure all of us can sometimes. Awesome job.
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thank you...I wasnt really worrying about the form or anything though....I was just being angry and trying to type through tears...but thanks
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haha thanks...I hate men
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Kewlz Dude
Hey, if this is crappy, than my poems, must really really really really really really suck. And I know exctly how you feel. Just a couple days ago, on Friday, I told this to someone. Ohk, so not the same exact words, but the same exact meaning behind it. I loved this poem. Great job! Keep up the good work! -
Don't be so hard on yourself. This is a wonderful poem. Everyone can relate to this at least once in their lives (I know that I can can). The poem is filled with really strong emotions-- I like that. While the form may need a little work, overall the poem is wonderful. Keep up the excellent work. I look forward to reading more.
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Thank you...
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this isn't a crappy poem...i could really relate 2 it...even though this poem could use a little work, the emotion and point is there and that's all that really matters
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