I was wondering just yesterday,
Could you be the one that brightens my days.
To make me forget black and white,
To make me see not just day or night.
I was thinking of how I feel,
About our love could this be real?
Could you show me more then I know,
Expand my mind, treat me as your own.
I wonder if you could love me for me,
And I would show you everything you want to see.
I could open up my heart,
We could try this from the start.
I know I love you,
And you told me this too.
Could you be what I have always dreamed of?
Could you be everything I always wanted.
Could you?
I'll just have to wait and see.
Maybe this could be everything,
Maybe you can be everything I have always wanted.
You and me,
Facing everything,
Together we stand,
Facing this world hand in hand.
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Written September 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Im Melting In Your Eyes by Snaaaap.
300 points, ended September 16, 2005, 5 entries
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Good Job on this Poem Really Nice Poem.. I enjoy reading it. Awesome Work on it
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i don't i have a gmail address. its iloveyounot24@gmail.com so yea if you want to talk just let me know.
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if you have a yahoo or msn email address give me it
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really well if you want to talk let me know
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awwww that cute... hey maybe you never know.
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grool
whoa this is rally good it made me feel like you were talking to me and i nearly started to shout out yes repeatedly anyway its good
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