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That One Last Flight

They flew Through the sky on that morning not knowing it would be their last.
Mothers, fathers, brothers ans sisters alike were lost that morning.
On that one last flight in an act of terrorism.
Just because  of out freedom and different cultures.
The people on that last flight lost their lives and will leave a mark on this country that will never heal.
On this one dreadful day many people cry over the lost victims.
On this one day but those people will all ways remember the ones who died that day. On that last flight.

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thisis for 9/11 victims
Written September 11th, 2005

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  • TheMoodchangingPoet
    January 14, 2007

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    Oh... this is indeed sad. And it's not just the plave victims - lots of people died in the towers...
    You chose a very powerful topic to write about... Well done.


  • my bloody secret
    December 18, 2005
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    yay!


  • suicidal-dramaqueen
    December 15, 2005
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    Ok Tater, how did you become shuch a good poet? lol. Good write!


  • SexyAngel0418
    September 11, 2005
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    WOW DARLIN... This is an awesome poem... I really like it!!! I'm trying to come up with something for 9/11 but no luck so far... Good luck in the contest!!!

    Hugs,
    AP Mommy