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What

What beauty is there is life,
When none is found in death.
What joy is brought from a rose,
When you never felt its thorn.
What warmth is there in a kiss,
When you've never been alone.
What meaning does anything have,
When you’ve never felt it’s pain.

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Written September 11th, 2005

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  • JesusLove
    August 1, 2008
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    this poem is really good,i like the ryhme in "what"


  • dreamdragon6484
    April 29, 2008

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    cool

    this is a great indepth write. just as good goes with evil, joy can't be felt with out sorrow.
    everything has it's counter part, and noe can survive with out the other

  • MysticalBabyBlues
    December 8, 2007

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    Great work! Straight and to the point. It also flows very well. Keep it up and don't let your talent die, for we would all miss out on your wonderful talent

  • Vyr
    October 24, 2006
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    Awesome work, I love the rythm to this piece. hope to see more work like this.


  • x-tormented rose-x
    September 29, 2006
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    wow. I really like this. Its great! Short and tp the point! I just enjoy how you wrote it. It all makes perfect sense!


  • robert davidson
    September 24, 2005
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    Yes, we can only know real joy if we've first known real sorrow. Without the pain in life we would vegetate. You have captured this theme remarkably well in such a concise way in this poem.

    Robert Davidson.


  • Deathisjstthebging
    September 11, 2005
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    Great Piece

    So true and thank you for visiting my page.
    I don't know if you got to see the picture.
    You have some questions that I am working on answering.
    It maybe horrific in format but that is how I write.
    Great piece here..
    DIJTB

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