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through our eyes

Through his eyes
am i perfect,
just like that first crush?
Through his eyes
does he strive to learn more,
or was the flirting useless?
Through his eyes
am i worthless,
destined to be heartbroken?
Is he blind?
Does he realize,
through my eyes
he is my first crush?
Does he realize,
through my eyes
he is perfect?

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Written September 11th, 2005

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  • Jelly Beans
    September 11, 2005
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    awwwwwwwww!! very sweet~!


  • Things Fall Apart
    September 11, 2005
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    great piece!i like you kept saying through my eyes.it made the poem alot better.awesome job!