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Claire

Walking through the way,
You see a beautiful woman.
She is in yellow and blue jeans,
(Very fasionable)
And is craftily accesorized.
Captivated by this maiden,
You walk over to her.
"Hello," you say to her.
"What is your name, might I ask?"
She looks at you, and you see
A strange thing in her look,
Like she knows all about you.
"Claire" she says, still with that
Odly fixed assesing gaze.
Becoming uncomfortable, you look around
And notice a ring on her laft hand.
'So she's married,' you tell yourself.
"You necklace really is becoming you,"
You say, trying to break the ice.
She is still assesing you.
Five minutes pass, you wonder if she heard you.
"Thank you," Claire says in a quiet voice.
She speaks again, startling you.
"Is there a reason you came over here?"
She askes in the most polite tone.
You stammer out a "No, not-uh-r-realy..."
She walks away, beautifully.
Suddenly it hits you, hard.
"She was a mage warrior...
And a powerful one, at that!" you tell yourself.


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ok, so its not a background, but its a cool encounter!!
Written September 11th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • 13darkhearts
    September 11, 2005
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    eh, thats ok.


  • hot babe30
    September 11, 2005
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    yes
    very kool encounter
    and now i feel bad
    i made you enter but this
    is not wat was looking for
    i m very sorry!!!

    much luv,
    aby