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Immortal Memory

This date will never be forgotten.
Life will never be the same.
One resolves this to Immortal Memory,
So that life my continue
only roughly interrupted.

Immortal Memory haunts
No second chances
No escape for many
We call on the names of souls
Washed into turbulence and dreams.

Never more seen, heard, nor felt
Our friends, family and coworkers
Shine in the night's sky
with the stars and dreams
Of our Immortal Memory.

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Written September 11th, 2005

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  • Janomi
    October 22, 2005
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    Wonderful poem... I think that my interpretation is probably different from the perspective you wrote it from... I would be very interested in knowing what it means to you.

    I believe in this line:
    "So that life my continue"
    You meant may rather than my... very small typo... I only point it out for easier reading.

    Once again, well done.