come dark angel
fall with me
help me dig a hole for myself
six feet deep
come dark angel
sing a song with me
let the world feel its faults
let your secrets become one with me
come dark angel
let thy beauty be
let your scars be healed
let my soul be free
ride away into the dark night
hiding in the shadows
where your black tears fall
far away from the light
safe behind graveyard walls
your playground
where you tempt teen fate
( stephanie )
Author notes
this poem is about teen suicide
Written January 15th, 2003
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that was very deep, um...i don't know what to say except that it makes you really think about yourlife.
~sara -
excellent
I agree completely with SilentPain.
beautiful and touching. -
excellent
very beautiful and touching -
don't touch it!
Well, I believe everyone else stole all the compliments there are. heh. That poem was wonderfully written. There, I found one. -
don't touch it!
Really A Beautiful Poem..
Awesome Write.
Nice done.
Wael -
don't touch it!
great poem, especially the first stanza, it really flows.
i like the last line '...tempt teen fate'
it is such a great wording.
,,,=^..^=,,, Clare -
excellent
beautiful. very rythmic -
excellent
Great one loved it :) -
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the first stanza was well written and it caught my attention. good job
-ash-
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