I haven't heard a note in so long.
That I wonder where the music has gone?
See the Earth she no longer sings her song.
It seems that she has forever gone,
See we knew it was coming all along.
she has gone to sing in heavens song.
But i really hope that i am wrong.
So that your lives they won't be all gone,
While i listen to this angelic song.
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Written September 10th, 2005
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nice
This is really good, but some of the grammatical errors take away from it. If you correct them, and make it flow a little more, it will take anyones breath away. Just one example: the 2nd line, 'music's' should be 'music has'. This poem has a good meaning. Well done.
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AWSOME
Wow you have a great tallent! This gave me chills.
Always keep the words flowing.
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I enjoyed the flow, the rhyme, & rhythm....Love the first 3 lines:
"I haven't heard a note in so long.
That I wonder where the music's gone?
See the Earth she no longer sings her song."
That made me ask, Where is peace on earth? Does it exist? Will it ever return?
Great Job -
Oh I loved this and I too miss the way nature used to "sing". But it's human nature to destroy the things that bring the greatest beauty.
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Cool
Hey man thanks for commenting on my newest piece. Because of that, I thought I'd return the favor. I read this and first thing that came to mind was the whole Katrina mess but, this is a great work Katrina or no.
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