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Fear

I'm lying here in this hallowed place as i have for many a year.
i was told there was life after death when all i've found is fear.

Fear i didn't do enough before falling to eternal slumber.
To allow me to a cheerfull place always full of wonder,
But rather to a frightfull place filled with rolling thunder.

For fear is all that's holding me in this warm embrace.
That i get from my eternal resting place.

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Written September 10th, 2005

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  • uziphiel
    November 4, 2006
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    needs a little work on it's flow but people are scared to death of death but they'll get over it if you know what I mean!


  • hypnotice
    June 12, 2006
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    awesome

    i thkin that this poem brings out what most people do not want to say that they are scared and have taht raw fear as you have previously stated. i cannot believe no one has comented on this poem because it was really really good.