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Silence Of The Dawn

When the sea opens her mouth to swallow
You are lunged into my arms like a wave
Awaken by the moonlight, you realize
This is all a vague dream

Dusts of romanic fervor thrusts its haze unto you
For you are the audacious soul and wandering
The moon conspires a valiant legacy
To rise in silhouettes unknown

Breathing mist to burning fog
Ressurect our Sister's soil
You are reborn in Her caverns
Wounding the creature, you are saved

Give me moist rue and forget this midnight
As the dawn sweeps across phallus lands
You are rechristened with love in my arms
We grant the world with our fervor

Enthralled by your captivating soul
I rest in death in your unruing arms
Sullen desires to your caverns in lust
I die for thee in unholy rites

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Written September 10th, 2005

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  • I-was-the-only-one
    September 10, 2005
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    Wow this is really good! I think that your awesomely talented!
    lol "Love befor you live"
    * Mandiee*


  • Micah Young
    September 10, 2005
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    Breathing mist to burning fog
    Ressurect our Sister's soil
    You are reborn in Her caverns
    Wounding the creature, you are saved

    I really enjoyed this poem. I cannot even describe how many ways i took it in. thanks nice read