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angel

my darling angel..
save me from this hopeless night
silver moon eclipsed by fright
break the bond that holds me down
keep me here
keep me here

sweetest breeze...
move along my neck
feel me move me
watch me scream

listen for me...
sweetest of these angles
and keep me safe from this
this hell, this world
and cut us free
from this life


Author notes

just a little something i made up
not sure if it's completely finished or not
but here it is
Written September 10th, 2005

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