What if I were to tell you that I am in love with you
That I passionate my life to allow you entry and more
What if I were to tell you that my heart came alive because of your love
This is the life lived to be chosen in by love and pain
What if I were to tell you that I am wounded by your beauty
Crying aloud in bounded flesh in the night
(chorus)
You are the reason I live, the reason I die
Giving me hope in this sullen despair
Crying your name out in the night
You are my love that spoke to my lost soul
Silhouetting vows of hell with your angelic eyes
Screaming your beauty in the night
I love you, I die for you
You are my nocturnal romance in the night
What if I were to inform you of a paradise with me
That eternity is our audacious escape
What if I were to caress you with my fervor only you
This is the life a thousand mordant roses
What if I were to love you with my sullen passion
Wailing for you in gilded desire in the night
(repeat chorus)
We can romance in the midnight
I love you
We can dance in the moonlight
I want you
We can lie in the sight
I desire you
We can love in the night
I fervor you
(repeat chorus)
Author notes
This is a song that I wrote while I was bored and decided to write. So this came out of me. Enjoy...
Written September 10th, 2005
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wow that was amazing! You really are talented. I could almost hear the song in my head... of course I hear a lot of things in my head. jk But seriously this was really good.
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Thanks for the groovy compiment. I am over-ecstatic and grateful that people can enjoy poetry, whether it is mine or not. Anyways glad you liked it. Whenever I learn to play bass (which might be a long time), I am going to start a band and play all the songs I wrote. Including this one. Well, Cya
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What if I told you that THIS IS THE MOST AMAZING THING I'VE EVER READ!!! Oh my fucking god this was...there's not a good enough word for it even. Wonderful amazing...PERFECT! Wow wow fucking wow! If this was a song I would freak out...yeah I probably would. 0.0!!
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Wow. I really like it especially the end bit :
We can romance in the midnight
I love you
We can dance in the moonlight
I want you
We can lie in the sight
I desire you
We can love in the night
I fervor you.
Amazing emotions expressed. Great write. ~Alatariel~
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