Name: Temptress
Age: 22
Marital Status: Single
Eyes: Ice blue
Lips: Rose Red
Hair: Jet black
Top: Purple
Bottom: Long, black flowing skirt
Shoes: Black boots
Accessories: A golden heart pendant necklace.
Weapon: Ice pick.
Abilities: Tempting men into her trap.
Weaknesses: Incapable of love.
She doesn't trust anyone
Slightly insane
Can’t handle rejection
Background:
Temptress fell in love many years ago, the man cruelly broke her heart. In her sadness she made a pact with the goddess of love. She would never again love, in return she was granted the ability to entrap the cruel men in this world, the heart breakers and the insensitive. When they meet her they have 24 hours to prove their worth or Temptress kills them with an ice pick.
Author notes
Written September 10th, 2005
A contest entry
- I like.......THAT ONE!!!!!!!!!! by hot babe30.
300 points, ended September 11, 2005, 7 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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this is cool... i'd love to see how it develops
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Awesome poem
Wow I have never seen a poem written like this, completely awesome concept of poetry display
Hot babe: why not and ice pick its cold steal its sharp and best of all it picks {Pick-Pick-Pick} as 24 hours tics-tics-tics... I totally love it -
I think I will try to avoid her to be on the safe side. Sometimes I have a hard time proving my worth to myself. How are you? This is an interesting choice for the contest. Good luck.
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lol
wow
this is really good
but an ice pick?
i really really liked this!!
great job!
good luck
much luv,
aby
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