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[Oceans collide]

Oceans collide
Silence of eternity
Settles over the sea
Traveling the waves of beauty
As oceans collide

Author notes

No idea what this one is really about. It was going to be a lot longer but just thought that it was cute how it was...so deal with it
Written January 15th, 2003

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  • thought i knew
    November 6, 2003
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    it is cute
    I'm not sure what it is about either. When i was reading it i had a thought but then it finished and i lost the thought it's not there anymore but i'll probably remember sometime soon. If i erad over it again hehe i'm puttin this in my favs' it's just beautiful
    *hugs*
    liz

  • witchcraft
    January 29, 2003
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    excellent

    beautiful. truly beautiful. keep up the great work. blessings and lovestars!!


  • NurseFloyd
    January 15, 2003
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    excellent

    cute eh? hahah, yes very CUTE poem indeed=P