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Let me love you till entirety

Let me undo your red ribbon
Let me un-zip your white dress
Let me kiss your bare shoulders
Let me live between your legs

You know I love you
With all of my heart
You know we had
A good start
So don't hold yourself from me
Let me love you till entirety

Let me kiss your toes
One by one
Let me put my tongue
In your navel
Let me lay down my head
On your naked breast
Let me kiss your forehead

Let me suck your lips
And taste it's sweetest
Let me put my fingers
In your silk hair
Let me take you so higher
That you cry for more
Let me unlock your heart door.

You know I love you
With all of my heart
You know we had
A good start
So don't hold yourself from me
Let me love you till entirety

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