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Celestial Fervor

Open thy cavern for my disdain wishes
Fires of melting ice in stillbourn rites
Given into your romance on fervorous graces
Wishes of nocturnal amorous light
I love you
I die for you
And noew this blood is for your eternal life
For my last breath is to kiss your wine-soaked lips
Fell before this burning rose I give unto you
I live to die before your will
At your heel
On my knee
I propose you an aflamed wedding of the Depths
For the daze of Fate strikes down celestial pedals
We are all free from this pain and liquors of tears
I shall protect thee from harm and vistas of torment
I rechristen for you
I relive to breathe you
You are an angel in the nightsky
Watching over me and my weak aura
For your romance reads incantations of fervorous desires
And I fall in love (with lust) with you again

I am gilded only for you
For I am in love with you
You are my hope and wishes and desire
I am yours to keep for eternity so divine

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Written September 9th, 2005

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  • Festering Eye Sore
    December 10, 2005
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    Very nice. So beautifully dark. The word choice was superb, and really added to the depth and uniqueness of this poem. It just stands out, and far above most others I have read in a while. Beautiful job. Stay inspired, and keep writing.


  • masterblaster gold member
    October 19, 2005
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    Hi a very nice dark love poem, am doing a few dark poems myself at the moment, this has great feel and flow, a pleasure to read, all the best my friend ,ewill try and get round to reading some more of yours soon, hugs Di