glorious as the heavens
you are to me
up upon a pedestal
you seem to have put me
heart as big as a mountain
you have given to me
hold my tears within your hand
you seem to have taken from me
purple haze
shines thru my days
a color of happiness
as long as you stay
life isn’t nearly
long enough for us
eternity is better
in perfect love & perfect trust
~Lady Raven~
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Beauty is in the eye of the beholder!
Written September 9th, 2005
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The picture gives off a pure light of inchanting gesture and it adds to the quote in your coment loved the poem very powerful and very heart felt you always reach the heavens with your poetry so vibrant and soft like a water fall over a cascading over a forest of beautiful roses, I love love love it....
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Oooh! That is beautiful! I just love the pic you've used with this. Works very well together.
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Powerful emotions speak...
Wow. Inspiration? Precious writing. Love your style, always have since day 1 either dark or in this blissful light. Nice. REALLY nice.
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awesome
I think that this beautifully put together my friend. It flowed very well. "heart as big as a mountain" "hold my tears within your hand" seems like we give our loved one all that we are and all that we can be. ~~Shannon~~ -
um.....wow i love this poem it is amazing it just describes everything so perfectly and the emotion is just pouring from every single letter of every word it is really beautiful oh and i cant forget that awesome picture it fit perfectly
well keep up the good work
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great
Yeah I liked this one emotions and great visuals the pic fit's nicely as well kinda sad and nice too liked it
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