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'Acrostic' for HeavenScent4U








Having IM'ed with you now
enjoying a lot of it, in these post-Lovetorn days
and discovering more about one broken heart
vastly different than I and who was married to me for a day
everything that I thought I was looking for then
never measured up to the one basic thing you said you desired-
Simple companionship. So I searched deep with myself,
cursing my complexities, and I
entered into a realization that
nothing could be more basic or fulfilling
than a such a simple companionship.
4 days ago, I would have argued otherwise.
Until you came along with such a simple request, I was a complex mess.






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Written September 9th, 2005

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  • HeavenScent4U
    September 10, 2005
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    Thank you for yet another write which touched my heart. I see you are finally staring to understand You are such a sweetie. Bless you sweet soul.


  • wbiro gold member
    September 10, 2005
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    Thank you, oh ye who plays softly upon my radio...

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    September 10, 2005
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    This is so lovely. I really like it you sweet man. I surely hope you win and your heart shines with the love you have in it. You truly are a genuine soul with a sweet spirit!!!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    This is very sweet and the gift of true companionship is nothing to be downplayed my dear son. There are varying degress to relationships, just as there are varying degrees to love itself. This is beautiful hun.
    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
    ~~~Touchof1der~~~
    (, .•'(¸.•'´ ¤ `'•.¸)`'•.¸)


  • wbiro gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    Well, thanks for your fortune telling, Sexy! So you think I have a good chance at winning?!! lol


  • SexyAngel0418
    September 9, 2005
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    WOW... This is so sweet ap Daddy!!! You did a great job on this one... I really think one of these poems will win... lol...

    Hugs<
    Beth

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