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'Haiku' for HeavenScent4U

 

 


 






lost empty shell
searching for peace in autumn
finding it right here











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To someone I found to be a real person...
Written September 9th, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    Ahhhhh! My eyes! lol! Well, you did score a hit with the background!


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 10, 2005
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    How touching. Yes, searching and hopefully finding. Thanks for another touching write. I just love the background on this, it is just perfect for the poem.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    This is very beautiful and I can tell that your words come from the heart and you have a great concern for this one who seeks a true friend and companion. Wonderfully penned Sweetie!
    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
    ~~~Touchof1der~~~
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