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Mantra Of The Depths

Evanescent is the reality of decay
Grace fallen upon the rites of death
Poets kneel before altars of delerium
For love is the thrust of all temptations
Masterminded by the overseer of given writhes
For seething hallowed blood runs a crimson cold
And the rapings insist to overcome
Sanctify the unholy with angelic voices
Given rites by the howling moonrise
Rue angels and sullen the demons
For dragon-breath swarms with wine
Blood-stains on the loam
Cold
Vowing
Dead
Running as dark crimson floods of sapphires
Simplify the brotherss with the sisters
Mantra
One more life to give, as I die within amorous rites

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Written September 9th, 2005

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  • Laizia
    November 9

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    Dude after you commented on my poem i read alot of yours. you are a brilliant dark writer. MANTRA OF THE DEPTHS went in my msn name lol. brilliant vocab


  • Life-Unknown silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    Wow...
    This is absolutly crazy... I love it...
    This realy grabs your attention and makes you think about what is said... throws your thoughts in a few directions... and leaves you in wonder...

    Life Unknown
    Alexander