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'Villanelle' for HeavenScent4U

 

 

Are you not asking too much-

a romance under a starry sky,

to be with someone who shares your love...

 

After admitting your faults as such,

and still be loved until you die

are you not asking too much?

 

To give and receive the softest touch,

to receive love without having to cry,

to be with someone who shares your love...

 

The simplest things that can be conceived

permeating every hello and good-bye,

are you not asking too much?

 

To love, without having to clutch,

to speak, without the need to imply,

to be with someone who shares your love...

 

To hope a love can be redone,

cut short before it was given a try,

are you not asking too much

to be with someone who shares your love?

 

 

 

 

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Written September 9th, 2005

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  • wbiro gold member
    September 15, 2005
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    No, Heaven, I do not think you are asking too much...


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 10, 2005
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    Thank you for this very tender, loving poem. You seem to have a very good understanding of me and I like that. So do tell me Dear, am I asking too much? This poem really touched my heart. Thanks for such a beautiful poem and for entering my contest.
    Good luck to you


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    This is just beautiful that it almost makes mommy want to cry! I feel such longing and concern in your words here and maybe even tinges of regret? Remorse? I'm not sure exactly. You are such a caring soul!
    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
    ~~~Touchof1der~~~
    (, .•'(¸.•'´ ¤ `'•.¸)`'•.¸)


  • SexyAngel0418
    September 9, 2005
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    WOW... This is really sweet AP dadddy!!! i really like this one... You should get the gold!!! You did a great job!!!

    Hugs<
    Beth

    PS GOod luck in the contest!!!