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Sangrea

I stole your time-stamp,
so you could know who i am,
                                 and in my borrowed over coat,
      i lay waiting.
                                                       the rain comes crashing
                              into my quiet house.
    and i sense that your leaving.

Author notes

i duno, mostly playing around with word positioning i guess.... dont really like it, w/e.....
Written September 9th, 2005

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