Ditch the ads, upload images and much more - upgrade today from 5.95/month!
Read • Contests • Groups • Learn • Forums • Store • Help
 

Last Poem For You

No more you,
no more us,
no more thoughts on you.

No more tears for you,
no more poems for you,
no more hope for you.

My last poem for you.
I'm gonna get over you,
you're gonna be gone from my mind.

No more you in my head,
in my heart...
in my life.

Author notes

It's gonna take a long time, but i'll get over him, i know it. he's not worth it....(for full story, see my other poems)
Written September 9th, 2005

What did you think

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    • Line numbers  • Invite them to read
    : no Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have (?)

Comments

1 - 8 of 8

  • Whispering Winds
    November 30, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    well, he's not worth it...or is he? Love is so hard for us to understand until we find a true love. I know that i have that now with a very special man in my life. I dont know what i would do without him. What you do from this point is up to you. But do what is going to make you and him both happy.

    Much love to you,
    Tammy


  • vampiry Julianna
    October 6, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    this was a great write you did a wonderful job but you should put which option you picked in your authors comment box thanks hun
    again you did a great job keep up the good work
    good luck
    vampiry julianna

  • gurlhuluvsu
    September 12, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    sweet

    yea well.. hes a retErd... yes RETERD.. and a retard. but mostly a reTERD... so there.. i said it.. RETERDS SUCK!


  • BareBeast
    September 11, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Hey buddy, I'm really glad I stopped to take a look at this poem. I feel like I'm going through the same thing that you are- just in different circumstances. Every line feels like it has a strong meaning and altogther it makes a nice pice, written from the heart. I feel like it's going to take me a really long time to get over my feelings for this guy. I've written countess poems about him and I'm always writing and thinking about him. I just feel like...if one day goes by and I haven't thought about him, I feel like- I don't know. I just feel like I'm obligated to think about him all the time since he has made such an impact on my life. I feel like in sum way, he is still apart of my life- as long as I continue to think about him...if that makes sense. I'm not prepared to forget about him- he might hav been ready to let go of me, but I wasn't. I kind of feel bitter that I'm still trying to deal with not being able to see him or talk to him like I was used to doing almost everyday. I never thought there'd come a time when I'd suddenly not be able to see him anymore. something like that, hurts and it's difficult for me to move on from, altho I know thatI hav to adjust to it. And I admit, i'm trying...but i'll never want to completely get over him.
    Once again, great poem that captures emotions from the heart.
    Loved it.

  • Michael 54
    September 10, 2005
    Edit | Reply

    Very Good

    Not much else you could say on the subject. Lots of luck getting over him. The more you write the easier it gets. Take care.

    Michael

  • Wierdone4eva
    September 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Thank you so much for your comment!

    ~Clara~


  • EmsandAbs
    September 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    Yupe it is good.....doesnt it suck how boys can jsut friggin saty in ylur mind but no boys can be awful sometimes dotn worry your not alone
    -Pinky


  • lost-and-confused
    September 9, 2005
    Edit | Reply
    This is really good! great job! ~~~~~~~Jamie

1 - 8 of 8