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I hate you

I look into your eyes and My heart fills with hate
You are saying that you love me But now it is too late
Your poisonous lies have given me a bitter taste
I know now that giving you my love was only a waste
Now you will know what it is like to hurt and to cry
for you never again will look into my blue eyes
I look at these wounds given to me by my own blade
I watch my blood pour into this red stream i have made
You will blame your self for what I have done
and will carry that guilt just like a loaded gun
you will regret that you ever turned to her,My friend
and even she will feel guilty of killing my soul in the end


so just so you know with all my heart I truly do hate you
I hope that MY FRIEND was worth the hell you'll go Through
and On that day when you pass Through the gates of hell
I will Be there to make sure that you are treated well
And that you get all it is that you both deserve
My price for your purgatory the hand of satin I would serve


I gave you My trust that all you did was shred
you played your games and you fucked with My head
you made me believe in all of your petty lies
when all along you were there between her thighs
the both of you saying how much you really care
Knowing that later on you would go over there
and lay with her while you both supposedly love me
But now the time has come to set myself free
And i will laugh at you as you watch me bleed
as on your pain this time I will be the one to feed
your tears and apologies mean nothing at all
For i will be gone and you will soon fall

so just so you know with all my heart I truly do hate you
I hope that MY FRIEND was worth the hell you'll go Through
and On that day when you pass Through the gates of hell
I will Be there to make sure that you are treated well
And that you get all it is that you both deserve
My price for your purgatory the hand of satin I would serve

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Written September 9th, 2005

A contest entry

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  • Niki1227
    September 27, 2005
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    thank you Drk no it wwasn't it is a new one nikki


  • DrkPoet silver member
    September 22, 2005
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    Nikki, this one was so deeply emotional. It's amazing how you can love someone so much yet hate them at the same time. Was this in your book, I can't quite remember?? Talk to you soon.


  • natari gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    Yes I did like it I think you gave a lot of emotion in this piece.


  • Niki1227
    September 9, 2005
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    Thank you spamwitch I am glad you liked it Niki


  • spamwitch
    September 9, 2005
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    Girl, I know exactly what you are going through and my heart goes out to you, this was a great really angry peice that really makes us understand and be right there with you...good job, I hope it makes some place for you in the contest and in life...

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