I shed these tears
In the dark for no one to see
To hide my feelings
of anger, sadness, and of being alone and scared
I've been scarred and have scarred
But no amount of power i yearn for
can change what disgrace i have done
I walk this path to the Dark Side
for hope of selflessness needs
I had a plan to save the one most dear
but in my anger destroyed her
And the truth will remain hidden
So now i walk alone
Forever as a puppet to the one who made me this way
My loyalty stronger than this power
My emperor who slain my heart
who killed my love
who gave me the ultimate power.
Revenge is what i now live of off
And I swear to get it.
Til then i remain here shedding these tears
in the dark for no one to see
my pain and anger that drives me more
These tears
These tears of a Sith
Author notes
Option 5~ Star Wars
Option 4- ap name
Written September 9th, 2005
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*shivers* Very powerfully written. I like the word choice you used; it defnitely casted a new light on the monster that is Darth Vader. Or so we thought... Great work, even better than your last. I feel inspired to enter your contest.
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i love this whole poem.
i also liked how you described your name.
thanks for entering.
good luck.
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SITH!!! omg omg omg!! i frickin love your name! power to the sith! ok i'm done now! your poem was shokingly amazing! you gave such a vivid take on your name i feel like i know you! thank you for entering and good luck!
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Thanks for entering my contest and best of luck!
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grrrrrrrreat like frosted flakes
very very very good poem. i love how it seem to be centered around the last Star Wars movie. any way it flows great. i hope to read more amazing poetry by you. keep up the good work. Again amazing write. i loved it.
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very nice and well put, I love it a little dark with sadness, but not so much it kills the hope a lovely poem all together great job and good luck in the contest, dont forget a second poem
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dark, sad and scary. ooooooooooh...i'm freaked now. beautiful and an awesome ending. so deep and touching. i'm left speechless
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This is really sad and its no good to feel this day, ive said it once ile say it amillion times if I have to, tomorrow is the first day of the rest of your life, the past doesnt matter as long as your willing to do whats right in the future or to try again, never give up and never give up on you, you can be happy
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hey britt again wow this was .... wow!! lolz i loved the choice of words and the beginning reminded me of well.... me! welp imma gos i'll try to talk to you tomorrow. love ya babe!! MUAH!
BC 
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exceptionally well written
This is a very emotional, heartfelt poem. I like it very much and you use very good descriptive words.
Thank you for your kind comments on my poem. Take care.
etherealforu -
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You should become an author of poetry. This is pure beauty. Sad, yet so powerful. I Love this poem alot and I like the choice of words ...I give you a definate applause...
Hope everything can eventually work out!
<3 Fluffy <3
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