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Romantic-heart /Acrostic

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Romantic-heart is the heart throb of AP
Only Ed can make a girl’s heart flutter,
Many have fallen for his charming ways
Always his poetry is written from the heart.
Never is he lacking in charm or adoration,
The Ladies come running each time he writes
Inspired by the wonderful poems he creates
Capturing  the  beauty of love and devotion.
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He is also a very caring man always there if you
Ever need a shoulder to cry on, Eds the man.
Attractive yes, he woos your soul with his writes,
Reaches out takes you by the hand and leads you
To romantic places with his visions of heartfelt love.

Author notes

Just a thank you to Ed for being there and listening.
Ed: romantic-heart is the Poet I have written about, he's just a friend who has a big heart.
I commented on
Across The Sands by shubs

I have notified Romantic-Heart
Written September 9th, 2005

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  • stormigrl
    September 26, 2005
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    I can tell alot of competitor's commented on this piece, I am sure Romantic heart has touched at least every Poet's heart. Including mine. (He wrote one for me) LOL.
    Nice write. Good luck in my contest.

    Marianne.


  • Prince Charming
    September 25, 2005
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    Wow this indeed make a wonderful tribute here. Seen his comment poem back two romantic souls meet. Makes me smile and think what would happen if the join together for a collaboration You ve done a great job my dear friend Good luck in this awesome contest Hugs Herman


  • jenelda silver member
    September 11, 2005
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    Three stars Vic, geeeeeeezzzz, awwwww you know they are always for you but I can't tell anyone what would all your girlfriends say if they saw your name on them? they would come after ME. you are always my little chickadee, you know that jenni


  • eternalpoet
    September 11, 2005
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    3 Stars ***

    woo hoo.. this is a lovely write... dum dum... and i know this is not for me... .. it cant be for me.. .. well but hey.. this guy is really jus soo lucky to have a poem written on him from my Pluff pluff spongey doll

    nice write... good work... thanks for sharing jenni wenni

    hugs and kisses

    gives choco

    take cares and have a nice time my dear friend............ just keep it up.............. your humble little friend.............. ............. ............... ............ - vic ( who else???? )


  • jenelda silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    AWWWW Yem, you have no worry with Mari, she would never leave you. No, I don't think his name is Romeo, awww, don't let a few tomatos stop you from being romantic

    Jenn


  • jenelda silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    Glad you liked it Ed, we all need friends in our life and I do consider you as a Friend.

    Jenn


  • Airborne Ed silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    Jennifer,

    Just smiling ear to easr
    Enjoying your beautiful poem
    Never letting a single word slip away
    Now listen to me whisper something soft
    In such a way that your heart
    Flutters with such an
    Exciting energy, so please
    Remember my friend, my heart is a poem away

    I enjoyed your poem and I hope you like my acrostic reply. I think it is as special as you are. I will post a link on my page so anyone can enjoy it. Thank you for such a great honour. You are really a wonderful friend.

    Ed


  • cayleyxox
    September 9, 2005
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    beautiful

    awe this is so good. its so cute!! your awesome Jennifer..


  • Yemassee gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    Shoot I'd better keep Mariza away from this guy!

    Are you sure his name isn't Romeo?

    Hey, I was a romantic once, but I had to give it up, the women threw tomatoes at me!


  • Samplette gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    Ooh la la...this is a tender acrostic...a bit flirty...
    Seriously, this is wonderful Jennifer. Very nicely done.
    Sam

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