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I Don't Give A Damn What You Think About My Oral Fixation!

I care not what you think about my oral fixation
I've been the veteran of so many wars both foreign and domestic
That I have earned my pleasures.

I care not what your opinion is of my lustful mouth habits
How I lick ice cream slow
And eat bananas in a fashion that's probably illegal in most states and municipalities
Oh, how I love those bananas in my mouth!

If you wish to share your disapproval
Of how I love to kiss and kiss wet for hours
How the rushing air vibrating my lips when I sing
Arouses me to no end
I will not listen.

I was a dead woman for most of my life
Wounded, misused,
I've taken my power now
I am complete.

You have your pleasures, I have mine
Warm chocolate fudge smeared on my lips
Whipped cream shot straight into my mouth with my head tilted back,
Receptive. Willing. Ecstatic.

So please don't make that sneer
And turn you nose up at me
Unless of course it's to make your mouth more accessible
So that I might kiss it.

Author notes

yum yum yum!
Written September 9th, 2005

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  • ThreeSingingEagles
    September 11, 2005
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    Well, HELLO NURSE!
    Okay, lustful one (lol) so glad the poem aroused you so.... since it is REALLY innocuously written, with really NO sexual references at ALL (tee hee hee)... I mean, it's really just a little ditty bout how I like to eat, and sing and stuff.... really now, I have NO idea how you see ANY thing sexual in here (tee hee hee hee)!
    Thanks for readin it, postin the comment, and 'gettin' it!
    Aloha oe,
    3SE


  • Malabu
    September 10, 2005
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    Well hot lips...I’m puckering for your warm moistly wet lips at this very moment.... your oral fixations can be utilized to its maximum potential...if only we could partake in the double oral position...just might be a moment to realize.... with multiple orgasmic extremes.... care to optimize your oral fixations with me?.. Imma willing and eager participant
    Huggs
    Malabu

  • LustNPleasure
    September 10, 2005
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    w00t w00t great poem and great content. I like it much. Yepper I like a large banana in my mouth at times to. "coughs, snickers, applauds" Great write.!

  • ThreeSingingEagles
    September 10, 2005
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    What a great comment! Did I applaud it? Can I applaud it again if I did?
    There are many of us blessed spirits in this world who have been freed. To laugh. To live. To be.
    To be us, in ALL of our Splendid Glory!
    May you find like-souls abounding!
    3SE

  • ThreeSingingEagles
    September 10, 2005
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    I can hardly believe I have a fan! I look for your comments now, they brighten and better me!
    Sorry, gotta dash off.... whipped cream calls (lol)
    3SE

  • richtea
    September 10, 2005
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    groovy gravy baby

    woop woop woop! wow sexy poem. love the defiance and the power. may your sensual vision spreeeaad...!


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    September 10, 2005
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    interesting, makes me wish i knew you in real life, i like that a woman who knows what she likes and aint scared about it. there is no closest freak here, lol, wow, that is a great poem had me laughing my butt off at some parts. i mean wow, you had me from beginning to end and it was enjoiable. keep up, you a good writer, seriously keep up the killer work, i'll talk to you later


  • IamtheDragon
    September 9, 2005
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    Quite a mouth full

    very good i enjoyd this one just as uch as your other writes
    KEEP em coming


  • spamwitch
    September 9, 2005
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    You go girl!!! I personally think that the only time men should open their mouths is to plant a kiss LOL..just kidding, this was really cute though.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 9, 2005
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    Whatever floats your boat and rocks your world... more power to ya!! I have a feeling that you aren't the only one enjoying these oral plessures. Thanks for the giggles!
    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
    ~~~Touchof1der~~~
    (, .•'(¸.•'´ ¤ `'•.¸)`'•.¸)
    Edited on Sep 09, 8:05 because ''.


  • Edna Sweetlove
    September 9, 2005
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    It's nice to know other people like a good mouthful too. You know what I like most in my mouth? Well I'll tell you. I like a big [censored content - AP naughty police]. end of message.


  • SimpleSarcasm
    September 9, 2005
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    This is asn interesting read. This write reminds me of something I saw in a movie or read somewhere I just can't remember what. It will drive me nuts until I remember.
    Nice write.

    ~Dee

  • ThreeSingingEagles
    September 9, 2005
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    oooo yeah!
    Hey, your front page says you're in love in FL.... so, what you no get no
    Chocolate smeared on dee lips???? lol
    PS
    How is it there? Are you near Ophelia? Shoots, what a year! Will it never end?
    Kisses (purely platonic of course) to ya!
    Oh, PS, is that your pic on your page? You a ball player? (lol)
    tee hee. Mischievous mood today
    Once again, thanks for the feedback babes!
    3SE


  • September 9, 2005
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    Interesting, very interesting. Empowered woman says, I will put anything, or anyone, in my mouth I wish. Humor to boot. Good job.

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