What if the world Stoped?
Just for you
For us
A single moment frozen in time
A second of eternity
Eternity in a second
Would you kiss me?
What if our lives were just a story?
A book of ageless pages
Words written by fate
Sentences written by destiny
While the pages turned
Would you make love to me?
And what if the world ended tomorrow?
A kiss lost to oblivion
A chance at love...
Realized to late
Lost to hesitation
Let's stop a moment
Let's turn the page...
Author notes
Written January 14th, 2003
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Excellent
This is a really good write. I enjoyed reading it a lot and I am glad that you shared it. You are a very talented poet. Keep it up.
-Throrin -
excellent
I like the way this works. the voice calls and moves softly, yet the message is that much deeper.
WSD -
neutral
this is really well written, i LOVE sappy love poems:) good job, and i thought i'd tell u this made me smile:):)
keep it up:)
kayla* -
don't touch it!
THE SAPPY POEM! YAY! haha, sappy but good! We all have our poems like this, don't feel bad! haha.=P
~Jenna -
don't touch it!
I really liked the image that this painted so vividly. *stopped(in the first line). overall,great write! check out mine!
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