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Dani, my dark princess

You were my dark princess
Ruling over that which wasn't yours
I gave you my body
You took my soul
I gave you choices
You took control
Never satisfied with this world
Looking for the next
Finding me
I was just another simple pleasure
I was granted your pale skin
But you gave your eyes to the smoke
Every kiss, a razorblade
Leaving me cut
and only begging for more
You fell
taking me with you
Searching for answers
Finding only constant questions
Run your hand over my body
Your nails of herroin
Inject me with your sorrow
Mix our tears
And get drunk in it's rain
My lips carress your every being
Yet you close your eyes
They don't belong to me
You gave them to the smoke

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Written January 14th, 2003

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  • witchcraft
    January 29, 2003
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    excellent

    beautiful. you are very insightful. like the images and emotion. blessings and lovestars!!

  • Beowulf
    January 23, 2003
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    neutral

    Something I have to read again, I like it when poems intruige me. Right on.
    -Beowulf


  • NurseFloyd
    January 14, 2003
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    don't touch it!

    I really like this one =) Actually think its my favorite out of all of them so far. Keep up the good work.
    ~Jenna