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Love, Adult, Fantasy






Love.
Adult.
Fantasy.

What more could anyone want?

Be mine!

to be continued...
with lots of mushy stuff,
companionship,
some erotica,
a sprinkling of humor,
many IM multitasking silences,
great wisdom,
maybe a first virtual kiss,
a long virtual romance,
a male perspective,
a great collaboration or two,
an acrostic of course made out of your name,
and creative whatnots and thingamajiggies...
then a virtual marriage,
a virtual comsummation,
a virtual kid or two... we aren't too demanding, are we!

Sometimes the simplest things are everything one needs.

Signed,
a complex guy who is not blind to simple basic desires in life...













PART TWO: THE 'TO BE CONTINUED' PART




Acrostic to HeavenScent4U:


Having IM'ed with you now
enjoying a lot of it, in these post-Lovetorn days
and discovering more about one
vastly different than I and who I was married to for a day
everything I was looking for
never amounted to the one thing you said you desired-
Simple companionship. So I searched deep with myself,
cursing my complexities, and I
entered into a realization that
nothing could be more basic or fulfilling
than your simple companionship.
4 days ago, I would have argued otherwise.
Until you came along with such a simple request, I was a complex mess.







Haiku to HeavenScent4U:


A lost empty shell;
searching for peace in autumn
finding it right here.






Villanelle to HeavenScent4U:


Is she asking too much?
A romance under a night sky,
To be with someone who now shares her love?

And after admitting her faults as such
and still be loved until she dies
Is she asking too much?

To give and receive a soft touch
to receive love without having to cry
To be with someone who now shares her love?

To have the simplest things we can conceive of
permeating their every hello and good-bye
Is she asking too much?

To have love without having to clutch
to speak without having to imply
To be with someone who now shares her love?

There is a love here that needs to be retouched
that was cut short before it was given a try
Is she asking too much?
To be with someone who now shares her love?






Shakespearean Sonnet for HeavenScent4U


Shattered mirrors lie in a dream now gone
as your years are now more happily spent
good luck has graced you with this, a new dawn
and has found you here as one HeavenScent.

How you came this way few do now discern
for you gladness you share without lament
and who would so dig to know you in turn
the way you get the know them, HeavenScent?

The coyote’s lullaby echoes near
a sliver of moon between our embrace
let me reawaken your passion here
as I your compassion and heartfelt grace.

A simple request is all you desire
to stir the coals of your hot burning fire.






more to come...

Author notes

prior background from the monster in me! lol
You're Heavenscent4me!
Written September 9th, 2005

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  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    September 15, 2005
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    shakes head and walks away can I escape the abnormalities of this place they call allpoetry? oohhhh I think I'll write a poem! LOL!


  • wbiro gold member
    September 11, 2005
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    Oh! lol I see you though I was addressing the reader! LOL! No, leo, I was addressing the contest host, so fear not, leo, I am not after your affections!


  • leo2
    September 11, 2005
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    I'm so confused now. I can't remember if I'm supposed to be the man or woman in this relationship..lol. Well at least I understood the poem and no I don't think asking simply for someone to share your love is asking too much. Good luck in the contest sir/maam..lol

    Sincerely,
    Leo Long
    Edited on Sep 11, 1:05 p.m. because 'typo'.


  • Touchof1der silver member
    September 10, 2005
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    It appears that my son has gone all out to woo this young lady and you have done a beautiful job of it as well. I think we need to have a mother/son talk soon! Great stuff hun!
    (`'•.¸(`'•.¸ ¤ ¸.•'´)¸.•'´)
    ~~~Touchof1der~~~
    (, .•'(¸.•'´ ¤ `'•.¸)`'•.¸)


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 9, 2005
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    But I'm not the jealous type Babe I have come to grow accustomed to open relationships as you can see. Afterall, I do have an AP wife. LOL

    As far as kissing a cold screen....Nah, not up for that. Tis true that the nurturing of the heart, soul and mind set much presidence over the body


  • wbiro gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    lol... kissing the cold screen... now we all know cybersex I mean AP relations are all about nurturing the heart and the mind, not the body! Two out of three dimensions aren't really that bad! Thanks for the offer, nothing like creating a little jealousy to get things moving!

  • LustNPleasure
    September 9, 2005
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    Whoa is this how to get an AP hubby? Man why am I still single? I want all that virtual kissing and stuff. Nothing like kissing the cold screen and dreaming its some ones nice hot lips. Blah anyways that was a very nice poem. If she doesnt want ya I'll take ya ^_^


  • wbiro gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    Hello, my bright angel! Yes, weird, I've come to accept that 'weird' can be the norm here on AP!


  • SexyAngel0418
    September 9, 2005
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    WOW... This is awesome AP daddy... But it would be wierd if you won b/c then your AP daughter's (Jess's) wife would be your wife too... lol

    Hugs,
    Beth

    PS Good luck in the contest!!!


  • B Chandler
    September 9, 2005
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    lol ur soo bad lol


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 9, 2005
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    You are so cute. I really like what you wrote about what I have in store for me, I'm just that kind of girl

  • wbiro gold member
    September 9, 2005
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    Ok, the Phantom of the Opera goes out the door! lol


  • HeavenScent4U
    September 9, 2005
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    One could want alot more dear It's worth considering but your background is scaring the bajezees out of me Not very romantic

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