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pay attention

i am not posting in this name anymore...


my new name is savetherice


so catch my new write there..



allpoetry.com/Poem/1501276


and add me if you feel it

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Written September 8th, 2005

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  • Seven Kinky
    May 31, 2007

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    HOLY POO! You're still on my list...but I have the new you, too! Crazy, isn't it. Well...I'm glad I'm ahead of the game and have added you already. *nods sagely* THUS...