~Spoken Hearts~
My heart bleeds of acid rains
Time and time again
Paths I tend have many pains
Love seems so insane
Gather all my lonely thoughts
Mend together these
Blanket my forget me nots
All on bended knees
Meet with me beyond the seas
Dreams they may come true
My thoughts sway like windy trees
Loving only you
You call me your baby blue
And with songs you sing
Love me, love me do
And I'll be your loving king
Meet with me beyond the seas
Dreams they may come true
My thoughts sway like windy trees
Loving only you
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Thanks For Reading Me! -Timothy
Written September 8th, 2005
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You call me your baby blue...I love that one line. I guess because at one time, I was someones baby blue (seriously). This was wonderful, ever need a singer to sing these lyrics/poems you pen, I'm your gal..lol.
~Carrie
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Brilliance TRUE GOLD
Everything you do
Is beautiful
You’re truly an advanced soul
Where did I hear that line
“Love seems so insane”
ouu this is beautiful
Sounds like
“Got to get you into my life”
“Dreams they may come true “
Only you baby blue
I’ve taken the ride of my life
Just to see that love is king
The happiness you bring
Is stunning in your melody
Our dear friend Rage of Reason
Will be so proud
His guitars rock n roll
Still we share dreams in our soul
Kisses Hugs Love
This is fantastic
Day-tripper
The intuitive you
Just knows what to do
Exquisite, My sweet Lord,
I love the background
RED and Black, classics for all time
You melt hearts in your wings divine
Even when I’m down
I’m up around you
That’s what you do
Baby blue
You lift everyone up
You give as the fountain of love
I see your love as sent from above
Oui a song of perfection in every direction
My motor of love is in overdrive
I wonder what I’ll find in the next song
Did I tell you your mesmerizing?
I can’t get enough of your sweet sweet love
Sorry to gush as we rush all over the page
Darling words flow through when your heart stays
As I stand in the light of a mystic heavenly sage
Write on my friend this song will never end.
I’m down on my knees looking up to love
In your never ending motor of love.
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As I read you yet once again, I am over taken by the love you share. There is no other heart that can compare. Thanks for sharing your wonderful song...for the love in you cant go wrong.
Thanks for sharing and Much love to you and yours,
Tammy
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It has a nice dreamy flow, with no stilted phrases that seem to go no where, very nice. This is the first time i've read your poetry, i think, and am very intrigued by your syle, you seem to be a pro with a bent toward whimsy. Any way, continue the good work, it was very much appreciated. I hope to be able to read more of your work in the near future and i hope you'll read some of mine. Blessings to you.
Tiphanie -
good
It sounds like a song. SIGH. This was wonderfully written, and I can't wait to read more. great job
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This was a most excellent poem. It was nothing less but so much more than touching, it almost brought a tear to my eye. Wow, this was great. I don't know how else to describe how much I liked it, but keep on writing, please! I'll be reading more of your work, most definately...
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beautifully written poem
the imagery really made this poem excel . I love the way you put it all together...
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Excellent!
Love the background and your poetic flow, pen on indeed!
-Me
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Oh Girl, Reading our wonderful Poeticweaver will be a smart idea. He is wonderful...
Love ya
Tammy
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Excellent!
This piece rocks! No joke, pen on poet!
-Me
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Love it... was better just you, don't you think? Big hugs
Renee -
Very nice. I can here the music it could be written to.
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Awww Sweet Heavens! Bard you nailed this one! Excellent piece of work here with rhythmic flow and pattern. Good usage of vivid imagery.
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well,my dear timothy,how deep is that wonderful heart of yours.just when i think you have written the sweetest love poem,you come with one even sweeter.this is just too special.it speaks to my heart.
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Timothy, as always, another beautiful write. You have one of the most beautiful hearts I know. Be Well and Be Blessed
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Magnificent
Beautiful stanzas... I am glad I was directed here by Angel to find such a wonderful and talented poet as yourself. Magnificent piece. I will be reading more of your work. ~Elba~
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AWW! gosh! another sweet one! how do you do it??!! I love reading your new works, they are all so touching and sweet! keep it up
luv always
~Tiffany
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